Jemma's I our editor for the project, through out the different cuts she came to me and Gavin to get our feedback.
Rough cut
Link to rough cut
My feedback:
- In the title sequence it would look better if Jessica landed on the floor on the beat of the music after jumping off the wall.
- The footage needs to be graded
- The music at the end is slightly too loud, it's hard to hear the dialogue
- The dialogue for Jessica is slightly out of sync
Fine cut
My feedback:
- The footage is still very dark
- Sound is echoey in places
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