Saturday 12 May 2018

Transition: Edit feedback


Jemma's I our editor for the project, through out the different cuts she came to me and Gavin to get our feedback.

 Rough cut

 Link to rough cut

 My feedback:
  • In the title sequence it would look better if Jessica landed on the floor on the beat of the music after jumping off the wall.
  • The footage needs to be graded 
  • The music at the end is slightly too loud, it's hard to hear the dialogue
  • The dialogue for Jessica is slightly out of sync
Fine cut



My feedback:

  • The footage is still very dark
  • Sound is echoey in places
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